The memories of this rhyme have been now replaced for me forever. This story has unexpected twists and I enjoyed reading it.

The only turn off was the editing, it was difficult to understand at places that the scene has changed. Also, the conversations went flying from here to there. In some instances, I had to reread to understand.

All In all a good short story but has a scope for improvement.

It is available on Amazon Kindle.

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